Tuesday 19 November 2019

T4 W6 writing post

Something was lurking beneath him. He heard the kid screaming for his life! The whale had been swimming under the kid and he was panicking. He had swum as fast as a jetski to getaway. He saw the whale leap up and stop to catch a breath and then the kid was missing. He knew one hundred per cent that the whale had swallowed him whole. He went to have a double check but the kid was missing before he knew it, the whale leapt up and everything went black……...

The clock was the key to everything; the key to moving through time and space. He had been walking for hours, days and even minutes but he hadn’t found the kid yet. He didn’t know where he was still but he kept hearing someone yelling,” Is anyone here?” The man said “I am here”, really loud then the little kid that he had seen before, was there. The little kid said, “hi, how did you get here?” The man said a whale swallowed me. The little kid said “yea same”.

They heard a roar and a rumble from the mountains. The rumble was a monster they had no time to waste but before they knew it they got a gigantic rock thrown at them. It didn't hurt and then they had a glimpse of light shone in there eyes and then there was nothing.
The epic journey so far was only the beginning. As they open their eyes they both felt a little strange. All they remembered was getting a rock chucked at them but when they tried walking they saw they had flippers instead of feet. They just realised that they had turned into turtles! 

They were turtles now so they really want to go to the sea but as they were looking for the water some birds that would get chewed on them like a piece of gum were watching. It was the perfect time to run as fast as they could. They heard a bird so they run even faster and then they made it to the sea and started swimming so fast. They liked being a turtle especially sunny themselves on the beach. 

And one day saw someone at the beach. They run to the turtle and patted it. They saw a bird and then they protected the turtle and a couple months later the turtle was a pet. It had a tank and it swam in the tank. The tank was really big and there was another sea creature in it, it was the dream turtle home.

The end


Week 6 term 4 wtiting post.

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